I like the way that you show both the correct and incorrect way to answer questions using le. Also, what is really great is that you explain why it is wrong, not just state that it is wrong. The only slight problem I saw was that the color scheme made is somewhat hard to read some of your notes. Using exact examples from the textbook and citing the page numbers was also a very good idea.
Fan-Si-Dan's comments:
I really liked how you went in depth to explain the usage of 了 and noted the exceptions to the rules as well. Your explanation was clear and concise and was well supported by the textbook examples. The only thing I would change is the highlighting. You had a great color scheme but highlighting entire sentences was not necessary. Next time I would only highlight key phrases or words. Your question also shows the reader you have a high understanding of Chinese grammar.
CVCHVVP2011's comments:
I like the way that you show both the correct and incorrect way to answer questions using le. Also, what is really great is that you explain why it is wrong, not just state that it is wrong. The only slight problem I saw was that the color scheme made is somewhat hard to read some of your notes. Using exact examples from the textbook and citing the page numbers was also a very good idea.Fan-Si-Dan's comments:
I really liked how you went in depth to explain the usage of 了 and noted the exceptions to the rules as well. Your explanation was clear and concise and was well supported by the textbook examples. The only thing I would change is the highlighting. You had a great color scheme but highlighting entire sentences was not necessary. Next time I would only highlight key phrases or words. Your question also shows the reader you have a high understanding of Chinese grammar.